cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~
rolling on the mists of yore trails of tears lay upon the floor twisting within a state of fear the loss of a memory held so very dear there it sits in languid fashion dissident drained of passion...
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Really beautiful ride in the dark side of unconsciousness, Lorrha !! Much enjoyed.
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Striking and soft all at once, rather like a painting on black velvet!! Thank you for displaying it here in Voices, my friend!
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Very beautiful Lorrha, could hear your voice in this and i had to read it twice. I truly enjoyed the read my friend, it flows very nicely, soft. Thanks for the share.
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thanks so much for reading Mir! it felt good to get a dark write lorrha
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dragon, thanks you for the wonderful comment - black velvet adds something to the write! lorrha
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Beautifully composed prose found here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wonderful tone and meter and sound!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could not help but to reread this one aloud!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent job!!!!!!!!!!! I relate as...
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She thank you kindly for the wonderful and heartwarming reply! lorrha
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Hi Lorrha, It was great reading this awesome poem again; congratulaions on your POW! Take care, Rick
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A beautifully haunting tribute for the lost dreams… Congratulation on the high honor dear poetess!
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illuminatix - thank you very much for reading and the wonderful comment. lost dreams, they haunt and howl desperately in the shadows don't they. it's a sound much like a banshee. lorrha
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