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cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

rolling on the mists of yore trails of tears lay upon the floor twisting within a state of fear the loss of a memory held so very dear there it sits in languid fashion dissident drained of passion...

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

Really beautiful ride in the dark side of unconsciousness, Lorrha !! Much enjoyed.

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

Striking and soft all at once, rather like a painting on black velvet!! Thank you for displaying it here in Voices, my friend!

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

Very beautiful Lorrha, could hear your voice in this and i had to read it twice. I truly enjoyed the read my friend, it flows very nicely, soft. Thanks for the share.

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

thanks so much for reading Mir! it felt good to get a dark write lorrha

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

dragon, thanks you for the wonderful comment - black velvet adds something to the write! lorrha

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

thanks so much janel! for reading and enjoying lorrha

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

Beautifully composed prose found here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wonderful tone and meter and sound!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could not help but to reread this one aloud!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Excellent job!!!!!!!!!!! I relate as...

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

She thank you kindly for the wonderful and heartwarming reply! lorrha

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

Congratulations on the Poem of the Week award, Lorrha !!

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

Hi Lorrha, It was great reading this awesome poem again; congratulaions on your POW! Take care, Rick

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

A beautifully haunting tribute for the lost dreams… Congratulation on the high honor dear poetess!

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

thanks so much for reading rick lorrha

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Re: cumbersome ~POW 11/24/07~

illuminatix - thank you very much for reading and the wonderful comment. lost dreams, they haunt and howl desperately in the shadows don't they. it's a sound much like a banshee. lorrha

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